
shall i make a change
walk a new path
or circle back
to the old and familiar?
i am done
retracing my steps
sniffing for the comforting
scent of a mothballed
life once lived
i must
circle ahead
in search of
something new
like the sweet scent of
fresh dew
i shall savor
this moment
savor each
moment
inhale a new future
and exhale mothballs
ah, but the smell of mothballs
takes me back
circles me around
does it do that to you too?
~ Elizabeth Anne Ives

From the NaPoWriMo website:
Today’s prompt (optional, as always) is based on this poem by Claire Wahmanholm, which transforms the natural world into an unsettled dream-place. One way it does this is by asking questions – literally. The poem not only contains questions, but ends on a question. Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that similarly resists closure by ending on a question, inviting the reader to continue the process of reading (and, in some ways, writing) the poem even after the poem ends.
This poem grabbed me because I could so relate to the words. The question at the end made me think about how hard it is to leave the familiarity of the old even when we’re ready to blossom. Well written!
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Thanks so much, Jean😊 Glad this poem resonated with you.
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Wow. A very well-done jump onto the prompt-mobile. Good job Elizabeth!
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This is wonderful, you have inspired me with this challenge…
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So glad you enjoyed it 😊
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